Kia ora Mele, I am very impressed with you and your friend's poetry! I like how you've used a range of language features such as similes, repetition and questions. Maybe next time you could add the author of each poem to all slides too :) Keep up the great work! Whaea Ocea
Ka pai Mele and friends. These are amazing poems and presented in such an engaging way. I like your language choices with words like seep and trickle for the first poem. Look out for the poetry slam section of the Summer Learning journey that's coming up!
Kia ora Mele, I am very impressed with you and your friend's poetry! I like how you've used a range of language features such as similes, repetition and questions. Maybe next time you could add the author of each poem to all slides too :)
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Hello Whaea ocea Me Mele here Thank you for giving me and my friends this great feedback.
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Ka pai Mele and friends. These are amazing poems and presented in such an engaging way. I like your language choices with words like seep and trickle for the first poem. Look out for the poetry slam section of the Summer Learning journey that's coming up!
ReplyDeleteWow thank you Mr Margetts for this wonderful comment! and sure thing we will look out for the summer learning journey thats coming up.
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