TWIN TUNNELS PT 3
Zac: AHHHHHH NO NOT MY BROTHER WHERE IS HE!!!???? TELL ME NOW!!!!!!
Tiny Tim: He is in the tunnel with some kind of twin girl. *Scary Voice*
Zac: W-W-W-H-H-H-H-A-T-T- What Twin girls???
Tiny Tim: Lets just my daughters Bella and twilight
Tiny Tim: umm well they were hold up a second are you trying to make me not chase you anymore?
Zac: No, what are you talking about? SIKE I LIED
*ZAC STARTS RUNNING AGAIN*
Tiny Tim: Oh you're gonna get it. Like your brother did…… *Creepy Voice*
Malo e lelei Mele, I am really intrigued to see where you story goes next, you have done a great job creating suspense, I like you have done it in different parts. Also how you have described the voices of people really shows what the characters are like!
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Kia ora Mele. I really like the way you end each post on a cliffhanger. I'm looking forward to part 4. I'd also love to see an animation or movie with this storyline!
ReplyDeleteFakalofa atu Mr Margetts sorry for the late reply but yes Me and my team will be getting on with part as soon as we have free time also thank you for your suggestion we will try and see if we can try out the animation or the movie.
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